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'' | ''The following review was originally published by Tera on her Blog, A Succubi's Tale on [https://www.succubus.net/blog/2018/03/23/a-review-of-futanari-succubus-stories-maris-the-succubus-by-zina-nova/ March 23, 2018]'' | ||
Darla finds herself intrigued by the succubi and incubi, she wonders about them, who they are and what being with one might mean. She calls out to Maris in the hope that something might happen and when Maris appears, something most certainly does. | |||
The work is an erotic hot flash with succubus, futa, domination and submission themes wrapped around the storytelling. Very sensually written, the characters are drawn to each other and what follows is passion and desires unleashed and a need discovered that comes fully to both. | |||
The erotica is a slow burn with a really well done climax at the close that offered something a bit unexpected as well. There is a strong emphasis on the futa theme, but equally the domination aspect of the story takes over the story very quickly and it’s told in a way that wasn’t over the top or silly and I thought it worked really well. | |||
Maris, the succubus of the story, isn’t evil, she’s more naughty and a temptress more than anything else. She teases Darla into her orbit and then enamours her, perhaps with a bit of mind control around the edges, to submit. That aspect of Maris is really delicious, she is both temptation and controller in the story which fits her and Darla’s needs so very well. She is a futa of course, and that aspect of her is sensual as well, it’s not jarring or seems out of place. It’s her nature, Darla is attracted to that, and what follows is their entanglement that I really did like a lot. | |||
Three and a half out of five pitchforks. | |||
Quite a lovely erotic succubus hot flash story and really so very sensual in the telling. It’s a shame that is was so short, that the story closed in a way that says something more would be waiting for the characters, but wasn’t explored. The what comes next questions are very telling and I do wonder about that. | |||