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== Book Review == | == Book Review == | ||
'' | ''The following review was originally published by Tera on her Blog, A Succubi's Tale on [https://www.succubus.net/blog/2020/06/14/a-review-of-fertile-for-my-futa-demon-by-amelia-rose/ June 14, 2020]'' | ||
Lulu desires something, a wish that her interest in the occult might bring to be real. Scarlett is very real and she is very willing to make both of their dreams come true. | |||
The work is a very short, what I call a pamphlet, erotic hot flash story which mainly focuses on a futa and futa transformation theme with a little succubus edge as well. It’s something of an expression of desire which the demoness of the story brings to be real for the main character. But it is dearly a short story, there’s really not a lot of character development beyond the futa transformation and it feels a bit abrupt and lost at times as well. | |||
Scarlett, the futa demoness of the story, has some interesting succubus aspects to her, She’s quite dominant, a bit single minded as well as to what she wants from Lulu. She’s not evil and really not stereotypical either. But it is a shame that there’s really not a lot told about her and it would have added something to the story overall. | |||
Two and a half out of five pitchforks. | |||
Overall this is far more a futa transformation story with a little bit of a succubus theme than anything else. With the story being so short, it’s too rushed and too scattered by far. The work really needs an editing paus to clean things up and add some more time to the connection between the two characters which I think really would have made this a better read overall. | |||
== External Links == | == External Links == | ||
*[https://www.amazon.com/Fertile-Futa-Demon-Amelia-Rose-ebook/dp/B088B6Q7MY/ This work in Kindle Format at Amazon.com] | *[https://www.amazon.com/Fertile-Futa-Demon-Amelia-Rose-ebook/dp/B088B6Q7MY/ This work in Kindle Format at Amazon.com] | ||