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The Succubus Heart Squad (eBook)
|The Succubus Heart Squad|
The Succubus Heart Squad eBook Cover,
written by lust king
|Publisher||Amazon Digital Services|
|Publication date||March 6, 2021|
The Succubus Heart Squad is an eBook written by lust king. In this work several characters are Succubi.
- Title: The Succubus Heart Squad
- Author: lust king
- Published By: Amazon Digital Services
- Length: 47 Pages
- Format: eBook
- ASIN: B08Y7Y3HYB
- Publishing Date: March 6, 2021
A crack team of succubi bring passion to Valentine's Day.
The following review was originally published by Tera on her Blog, A Succubi's Tale on April 11, 2021
It’s Valentine’s Day and Pitor has a problem or rather several of them. Mysterious women claiming to be succubi are appearing and looking forward to encountering him soon. But is this a joke or something far more?
Overall this is a fun work, the succubi, both in their actions and how they are described are a delight, their style is very appearing and overall they turn the story into a mixture of comedy and erotica that worked… to a point. It becomes a problem when there’s a language barrier to overcome in the author’s writing.
The work needs a lot of editing as a whole, the author likely is not a native English speaker which takes a lot out of the story and that’s a real shame. It’s cute, funny, and many times I dearly wished that the story had flowed better than it was.
Two and a half out if five pitchforks.
This is truly a lovely idea and the story has so much potential in it, but the language and editing issues hurt things a great deal. I’d hope the author will find someone to help with their prose, to make this story everything that I think it can really be.
After all, cute and fun succubi that care are a very special thing.