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The Succubus Heart Squad (eBook)

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The Succubus Heart Squad
The Succubus Heart Squad eBook Cover, written by lust king
The Succubus Heart Squad eBook Cover,
written by lust king
Author(s) lust king
Publisher Amazon Digital Services
Publication date March 6, 2021
Media type eBook
Length 47 Pages
ASIN B08Y7Y3HYB

For other uses of the word Succubus, see Succubus (disambiguation).


The Succubus Heart Squad is an eBook written by lust king. In this work several characters are Succubi.


Overview

  • Title: The Succubus Heart Squad
  • Author: lust king
  • Published By: Amazon Digital Services
  • Length: 47 Pages
  • Format: eBook
  • ASIN: B08Y7Y3HYB
  • Publishing Date: March 6, 2021


Plot Summary

A crack team of succubi bring passion to Valentine's Day.


Book Review

The following review was originally published by Tera on her Blog, A Succubi's Tale on April 11, 2021


It’s Valentine’s Day and Pitor has a problem or rather several of them. Mysterious women claiming to be succubi are appearing and looking forward to encountering him soon. But is this a joke or something far more?

Overall this is a fun work, the succubi, both in their actions and how they are described are a delight, their style is very appearing and overall they turn the story into a mixture of comedy and erotica that worked… to a point. It becomes a problem when there’s a language barrier to overcome in the author’s writing.

The work needs a lot of editing as a whole, the author likely is not a native English speaker which takes a lot out of the story and that’s a real shame. It’s cute, funny, and many times I dearly wished that the story had flowed better than it was.

Two and a half out if five pitchforks.

This is truly a lovely idea and the story has so much potential in it, but the language and editing issues hurt things a great deal. I’d hope the author will find someone to help with their prose, to make this story everything that I think it can really be.

After all, cute and fun succubi that care are a very special thing.


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