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Monsterhunters: My Brother's Succubus (eBook)
|Monsterhunters: My Brother's Succubus|
Monsterhunters: My Brother's Succubus eBook Cover, written by Lorelei Black
|Publisher||Amazon Digital Services|
|Publication date||February 12, 2013|
|Followed by||Monster Hunters: Slave to the Succubus|
Monsterhunters: My Brother's Succubus also reissued and retitled as Monster Hunters: Succubus vs Virgin, is an eBook written by Lorelei Black. It is the first work in the Monsterhunters series by this author. In this work one of the main characters is a Succubus.
- Title: Monsterhunters: My Brother's Succubus
- Reissued As: Monster Hunters: Succubus vs Virgin
- Author: Lorelei Black
- Published By: Amazon Digital Services
- Length: 9 Pages
- Format: eBook
- ASIN: B00BF4G5MW
- Reissue ASIN: B00BLO167U
- Publishing Date: February 12, 2013
- Reissue Publishing Date: February 25, 2013
Other Works in this Series on SuccuWiki
Tyler and Misty are Monsterhunters. They're investigating a string of murders, when Misty wakes up to find her stepbrother fucking an unknown woman in their hotel room.
When she realizes the woman is a Succubus, a demon who lures men into bed and kills them, it's already too late and Misty is captured and forced to fuck her own brother.
This isn't exactly how Misty had imagined it, but she'll take what she can get...
The following review was originally published by Tera on her Blog, A Succubi's Tale on 
This is, for the most part, kind of an origin story about a brother and a stepsister that are in the monster hunting business for lack of a better explanation. We learn a lot about their past, their relationship and then are thrust into one of their current cases which involves a lot of young men being killed and then being drained of their blood. And this leads them both to encounter a Succubus who takes advantage of Tyler before making Misty have sex with him. And in the aftermath, things are really a lot different than they were before the Succubus was involved in their lives.
It’s actually an interesting story in the beginning when the origin of the two are told, and it sets up some interesting possible themes and stories for the future. But then the story drifts into the heavy sexual tension between the two of them and that evolves towards Misty showing off herself to Tyler and he to her.
Once that’s past, then the Succubus appears, has her way with Tyler and, for the time she is there, she’s interesting in a few different ways. There is a bit of a hint of some kind of Egyptian background to her that we never learn anything about nor is it explained why she acts like a vampire and takes blood from her victims. So, I’m kind of split on her. She’s interesting, but a bit too monstrous for my tastes. She is also, extremely dominant in nature to the point where she abuses both of them in the room with her… and she appears for much too short a time.
Then comes a shift in how Tyler acts, and what he, for lack of a better description, demands from Misty. I have the thought that somehow the Succubus has changed both of their attitudes and possibly that explains what happens and that’s part of why I have problems with this work.
Both the Succubus, and for that matter Tyler and Misty really are very dominant and abusive in their natures. While that gives them personality, it makes it hard to want to read another book about them.
And I thought that’s what I found when I discovered the second title from this author, but I was so very wrong about that. They simply retitled the work as far as I can see and then published it in a way where someone that bought the first book would have to buy the second one as it seemed to be different.
Should there be another work in the series, I admit that I will think about buying it a good long time before I do so. That’s a shame because the author tells a good story even if the erotica is more violent and harsh than I personally like to read.
I’m giving this work one and a half out of five pitchforks.
Yes there is a Succubus in this story. Yes she has her way with both main characters to a point. But really the entire point of the story was to get brother and stepsister into bed together. The Succubus could have been taken out of the story and she would have never been missed.
- This work in Kindle Format at Amazon.com - No Longer Available
- Reissued as Monster Hunters: Succubus vs Virgin in Kindle Format at Amazon.com - No Longer Available