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Desires of a Latex Succubai: Vol 2 (eBook)
|Desires of a Latex Succubai:|
Desires of a Latex Succubai: Vol 2
eBook Cover, written by Marisa Mai
|Series||Desires of a Latex Succubai|
|Publisher||Amazon Digital Services|
|Publication date||April 30, 2021|
|Preceded by||Desires of a Latex Succubai: Vol1|
Desires of a Latex Succubai: Vol 2 is an eBook written by Marisa Mai. It is the second work in the Desires of a Latex Succubai series by this author. In this work the character Ivana is a Succubus.
- Title: Desires of a Latex Succubai: Vol 2
- Author: Marisa Mai
- Published By: Amazon Digital Services
- Length: 35 Pages
- Format: eBook
- ASIN: B093YB3ZSH
- Publishing Date: April 30, 2021
Other Works in this Series on SuccuWiki
Ivana is a Queen and Oliver is the lucky-unfortunate she has chosen to help her kinky plans come to fruition.
The following review was originally published by Tera on her Blog, A Succubi's Tale on June 13, 2021
Oliver now finds himself at his Mistress’ beck and call, discovering that being hers means obeying in all things and for always. But another succubus appears with her own schemes and Oliver learns that being a pawn to his Mistress is more difficult than he expected.
There’s a lot of good progression in the overall storyline which I think is becoming more interesting. Yes, Oliver is used as a plaything by Ivana and the other succubi that appear. But there’s a lot of character development happening that kept my interest. Ivana is, as seems her character, very much closed off in her real feelings and how she wants things to be. There are some moments when her actions might be real, or might be just a set up, but that makes her more interesting as a character than she was in the first book.
Her newly appearing rival, Magenta, reminds me of a latex fetish model for some reason, though I can’t put my finger on who that is at the moment. She’s very sure of herself, but might be a little over the top and taunting for what she is to the story itself. I do think she’s a good foil to Ivana, perhaps she will return at a later point and be more of a presence than she was in this part of the series.
The erotica runs at a warm level towards the occasional hot flash. Those with a fetish for domination and control will find parts of the story to their taste, but I think it’s a bit too over the top at times and it feels rushed when it shouldn’t have been far too often. The one good thing about the erotica is that it does allow for the other succubi in the story, and their fetishes, to come out and that takes Oliver into some cute situations and also puts him at some risk which worked well.
Overall this is a good follow up to the first work, though it still needs another editing pass for some tense and word issues at times. Some of these are very distracting and made me trip over some parts of the story. I’d also suggest that some focus around the storyline would be good to take this from the erotica alone into something better still.
Three of out five pitchforks.
The series is getting more interesting, there are plans afoot and where that takes Oliver will be, I’m sure, a journey. There’s a lot of good here, it can be better still with some care taken to make the dialogue sound better and the flow of the work be more than it is.
A third work is planned, I’d like to see Ivana reveal more of herself, and how that will change Oliver will be the question needing to be answered.