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The Demon Made Her Do It: Her Best Friend (eBook)

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The Demon Made Her Do It:
Her Best Friend
The Demon Made Her Do It: Her Best Friend eBook Cover, written by Charlene Hunt
The Demon Made Her Do It: Her Best Friend eBook Cover, written by
Charlene Hunt
Author(s) Charlene Hunt
Series The Demon Made Her Do It
Publisher Smith Associates
Publication date May 4, 2015
Media type eBook
Length 22 Pages
ASIN B00X51ZIVC
Preceded by The Demon Made Her Do It: Her Mother's Boyfriend
Followed by The Demon Made Her Do It: The Priests

For other uses of the word Incubus, see Incubus (disambiguation).


The Demon Made Her Do It: Her Best Friend is an eBook written by Charlene Hunt. It is the second work in the Demon Made Her Do It series by this author. In this work the character Omat is an Incubus.


Overview

  • Title: The Demon Made Her Do It: Her Best Friend
  • Author: Charlene Hunt
  • Published By: Smith Associates
  • Length: 22 Pages
  • Format: eBook
  • ASIN: B00X51ZIVC
  • Publishing Date: May 4, 2015


Other Works in this Series on SuccuWiki


Plot Summary

Living in New York City can be costly, unless you’re willing to turn lesbian. After seducing her mom’s hot boyfriend, Lacey’s been kicked out on the street, with all her worldly possessions in her suitcase. Luckily Cynthia, an old friend from high school, has invited her to come crash at her place in New York City.

But that place actually belongs to Cynthia’s boyfriend, Dave, who’s not thrilled with the idea of having another eighteen-year old girl under his roof. However, Lacey has a secret; she’s in service to the sex demon Stygos, and the demon knows exactly what fantasy will turn Dave around. He’d love to watch some live girl-on-girl action, and the fact that Cynthia’s not so sure about it makes it even hotter. Will Lacey be able to convince her reluctant best friend to enjoy her lesbian attentions? With a sex demon like Stygos directing the action, there’s little doubt.


Book Review

The following review was originally published by Tera on her Blog, A Succubi's Tale on March 19, 2017


The series is actually two separate situations with two different women having encounters with two different incubi. This seems to have led to some confusion for the author as their book summaries mix up the main characters’ names from the beginning of the series. Beyond that, there’s really no thread that runs through all of these stories, they are a group of hot flashes in which each main character is, for lack of a better word, made to do things via mind control and sexual need.

That isn’t a poor idea for a plot outline, there’s some heat in that, a story to be told, but in this series once the main character is introduced, the slippery slide into the clutches of the evil incubi is relentless. Better than three quarters of the work is centred on what amounts to a porn movie scene as a whole. There’s no story, there’s no development of the characters. The incubi gloat, the women in the series are used in all kinds of different ways in an attempt to quell their need for sex.

And that is, to be honest, very boring. There needs to be story with erotica to make things interesting, but here that doesn’t really come, even if all of the characters do. There are little snippets of ideas which are interesting and really needed to be explored. For example, the terms of service snippet that appears in the later work is really interesting, but it’s never used in the story themselves. The story about Omat and Stygos isn’t told, they are mostly stereotypical incubi that want to toy with their prey and be amused in their reactions.

As well, the sudden shift from one story to another at the third book left me confused as to why that happened. The story of Meredith and Omat never really goes anywhere, which is a shame because that’s the more interesting of the two threads. The erotica is stereotypical in a lot of ways, the heat is barely present. More story could have helped make me care more about the characters and be more involved in the stories themselves.

The characters are cardboard, the story is thin, the erotica has little heat. As a quick piece of erotica, for some that will work, for me it does not. As well, making this a series rather than a single work doesn’t make things better, honestly I think it causes the series to suffer a lot.

Two and a half out of five pitchforks.

The series is mostly porn movie scenes with a little bit of plot trying to hold it all together. I didn’t really find my way into the series, I didn’t find Lacey interesting or for that matter Stygos either. Meredith isn’t as well, nor is Omat. Hot flashes these works might be, but as things are for story, for plot, for developing the characters, I just didn’t find much of that here.


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